For self fun and study. I have white walls and chocolate brown curtains. I have an adorable tiger painting above my bed. Now heres why everything is where it is, so both king single beds are right up against the creamy walls because well I dont really enjoy having my annoying sister in my room but mum says she has to so I tried to keep us as far apart as possible. My king single bed is positioned against the wall with the big square window and next to that is a white bedside table filled with junk that hasnt been used in years! The space of my room is quite small, but if you take out my draws it's a massive space. I understand why mum doesn't like me being in my room too much. This page contains 100 metaphor examples. it is good. At the foot of my bed there is a built in wardrobe with lots of clothes and at the foot of my sisters bed theres the entrance to the room and the door to the en suite. My floor isnt actually that colorful but because there are heaps of clothes everywhere you cant tell how boring colour is. Honestly, its like DCs villain Two-Face; the fact on whether its tidy or messy is based of luck, like the flip of a coin. Remember to carefully proof-read and edit your work. If I could change anything about my bedroom I would start with a new duvet because of the bright mixed colours. It is mostly a cool breeze that feels like the ocean air. Well done, I can tell you put a lot of effort into it. I liked the way you captured the masculine feel of the bedroom. But Im lucky enough to have an en suite attached to my room! The best part of my room is the furniture and layout. Inspirational messages can be viewed on plaques, saying things such as dream, see beauty in everything, or friends are the family we choose for ourselves. The word believe is arched across the door to my wardrobe. 4, I like how you describe where the objects in your room where. However you could of used more of it like putting commas in longer sentences. Don't fix up anything that's awesome. You used capital letters in the right places and a few different types of punctuation. It has all the colours and designs that I love. 9 years ago. My room feels very charismatic and lively, as though a lot is happening in a single space. I enjoyed the comparison you made between the mess and cleanliness. After a long day, all i want to do is go up tom my cosy bedroom and either listen to some mellow music, or lie down, unwind and watch a bit of T.V or maybe even a relaxing film. You have described it so accurately. Floor, Where is it?, Under the bed, in my wardrobe. Also another way to brighten the room would be to open the curtains. In my bedroom the layout is the pain point of my room. I am going to take you on a virtual expedition through my bedroom. My lamp is blue with a very bright light. Use used I little bit of complex vocabulary but not a lot. Youd need to think of something your home reminds you of: a zoo, a swamp, a castle, or a zen retreat. Great writing. Nice story and good use of commas and punctuation. Hats and sports bags under the beds in the dark. Looking a bit further up you can see a sky light, the plastic that covers it from the reflective tube in the attic isnt fastened properly so if somebody slams a door somewhere it vibrates and makes such a commotion. My bed is nearly always made. It is a very modern bedroom, with a tropical theme. They are also a good way to annoy everyone in the house and wake them up when I want to. The creamy brown carpet is pleasant. On the opposite wall to that I have a standard size mat, a white mirror with one small painting beside it, the painting is of a small girl with a soft red dress on dancing. The colours in my room are bright with my duvet which is mixed with bright light colour then there is my light blue curtains hanging by a Dark aqua chair. great work i love that you did good punctuation and it was a good story. I also have bright dots that include the colours of light and bright pink, a turquoise dark and light and yellow. There is also a big built in wardrobe which has heaps of space in it ( where I chuck all my stuff in). I have small colorful dots (pink,green,yellow,blue), turquoise blue love hearts and my name stuck to my shiny white wardrobe. Well done. I liked how you took the audience on a trip around your room. These windows have a beautiful view in spring when all of the flowers have bloomed. Some of its correct. Opposite my window is my cupboard. When you walk through the door and look left you will see my desk and chair. In the corner on one side there is a small mirror and above it a poster of my name, that reminds me who I am everyday when I see it. In the left corner when you walk in is a stack of books, a few being written in swedish. When you say your home is a swamp, you usually mean that its messy, dark, and maybe even a little smelly. I have heaps of shells laying around the room and of course the posters and paintings of the beach. By Will Hayden. A few more sensory descriptions of your room maybe but we would happily rate you 4+. Right as you walk through the door you will notice the feature wall, its brown background with white and dark green flowers on it. I have a gray shelving unit and an old looking bed side table. For next time you could use more vocabulary and try not to repeat words. Above my bed, facing a window on the opposite side of the room, is a TV. One window is high on the wall with a rectangular shape the other window is more centered on the wall and is a square. All you can see is the drive way and trees. The material on this site can not be reproduced, distributed, transmitted, cached or otherwise used, except with prior written permission of Multiply. (The shark's teeth are sharp.) It's a very accurate description and well written but the mess is very understated! The furniture in my room is quite tight. This was well edited, but to get even better look over and over. I think Emma used lots of punctuation and i liked haw she told us exactly were her room was. Feedback - I read through this twice and couldn't find and spelling mistakes, and lower-case I's nothing this is great! But one thing that you could work on with your punctuation is how much you used. must suck cock. Then the colour of the furniture from a blue to a lighter colour. The furniture in my room is rather basic. Hopefully we will get you some colour in your room soon. I didn't find any spelling errors, but there was a mistake where there was no space between a full stop and the start of a sentence in paragraph 3. Im about to take you on a tour around my room. Usually when I have to make space/ tidy my room I put stuff in the wrong place. Really good writing, I can picture your room very clearly. I think that the things in my room represent me and my interests. So when you walk into my room on your right will be my bed facing you with a bedside table for my books, clock and a light for reading. I have massive two windows that take up almost all of the wall. Two walls are a normal bland cream, but the other walls are a bright tropical turquoise, But it surprisingly works! The accessories are the things I think help make my room unique. Overall I like my room more than hate it, for it has my favorite things and it is where I spend the most time, because I sleep there. On one side of the room has a bunk bed where the bottom bunk is a double and the top is a single. Feedback - It's good that you have the nouns and you have a bit of detail in them but add more. The layout in my room is a very practical layout and is a well organised way to have it. Use the planning sheet in your English book and the list of NOUNS and ADJECTIVES to assist you. You've really set the scene, invited us in and shown us how cosy it is in there. Thanks to those paintings my room has some colour. My bedroom is down the small hallway and to the right. SOPHIES BEDROOM The adjectives summarise the tranquil space really well. My desk is white with a blue frame, and is surfaced with rusty foreign coins, a USB and a dusty rubber tiger. 1. as big as a castle. There is a big window at the back of the room. 2. The duvet is black and white patterned with vibrant orange sheets. Every room needs furniture to make it yours and in my room the most important piece of furniture is my bed. It was interesting to learn about some of her feelings about her private space. There is a big black shoebox beside my bed which fits all my shoes in it. Only to sleep and occasionally use for Gaming, because my room is positioned at the end of the house, opposite to the end that the T.V is. Overall, I am very happy with my room and love the colour scheme that I have. Don't forget punctuation. All together I love my room because it is how I want it, its layout is how i want it, its smells okay,the accessories are good, and the theme is perfect. You used a lot of adjectives and nouns I could easily picture your room. The sheets of my bed are blue black, white with a bit of gray for the frame of the bed. For next time you could work on your punctuation (commas, full stops) and spelling. A nice piece of writing William. If you have a brother or sister whos bedroom is usually dark and smelly, you perhaps might call their bedroom a swamp, too! My bedside table is black with sticker brands covering them. So I think that my bedroom is good because it is big and warm and I like how it is big enough to fit like 6 or more double beds in it so I can have a lot of friends round. My miniature dog and cow sculptures sitting on my desk beginning to gather dust. The floor is usually covered in clothes and rubbish. It's not really the best looking room because it's really messy and has light pink wallpaper. My layout, it isn't the most complex layout but if you say it 5 times it's definitely complex. One of the necklaces is a sharp sharks tooth from Cairns and a golden dragon necklace from Yorkshire. Then you see the messiness, then you see carpet in my bedroom with its light creamy colour which subtly catches your eye. But they aren't dirty they are actually quite clean all thanks to my dog. The drawers hold all my hair ties, my sunglasses and headphones and stationary. The Five Imdb Parents Guide, Your full stops and capital letters are very good. Everyday Life Metaphors. The couch in the corner is also like a trunk that holds most my stuff. But love your work. The second style of my room is boys simply because its a boys only room for me and Jackson to share. Now I will take your for a tour on what my bedroom looks like. I'll describe my bedroom with my coziest of my bedroom, colors of my bedroom my bed and the state bedroom. Down one side of it there are five drawers also filled with special items and on the bottom there is another drawer which is filled with gemstones. The place that I hang out in, do homework and well of course, sleep. LOGANS BEDROOM A metaphor for home explains your feelings about your home by using figurative language. I made my bedroom the way I wanted it and set it up the way I liked it. In my room I have a book on my beside table that I am reading and I have books in my wardrobe that I have already read or need to be read. You could improve on adding more ideas and making them a bit more interesting. You have used some very good descriptive words which fit perfectly into what you were writing about. Yes it can be very messy and there are times I cannot stand that mess any more so I tidy it. My bedroom is small but everything fits in it. This layout works really well for me. 10 similes to describe a place. I am sure that I will add tons more in the future. So my bed is messy, but in general my room isnt all that messy. I also share the cupboard with my sister, meaning that I have the right side of the cupboard for my items. There is a famous song with the line Home is wherever Im with you. Well done you should be happy with what you have wrote. On the rubric I would give you a R4. Love Mum x. DOOGIES BEDROOM At first, I thought you were describing the ocean! it has a touch of my personality, and stays clean most of the time. Jessie T Usher Related To Raymond Usher, I have a double bed,white covers and matching pillows to my starry bed which is navy blue and white spots sprinkled all over It. Bed, Desk Drawers and bean bag are most of the furniture in the room, the double bed's too big for the room the there is the desk the desk is big wooden and has my docking station and all of my accessories on it, then there is the beanbag the bean bag is lodged in between he bed and the desk it doesn't get used much i only really put my school bag on it but i still think that it's a cool thing to have in the room. Maybe because it has two duvets on it and the sun is shining on it. Like it get messy easily, not a lot of room to have fun and other thing. It smells like fresh vanilla because of the bowl of dried petals and shells that have been smothered with air freshener. Who is the longest reigning WWE Champion of all time? Furniture is one of the biggest features of the room. Sometimes the temperature goes up and sometimes goes right down. Room Metaphors and Similes. JAMES BEDROOM My bedroom is the second largest bedroom in my house, and in this description writing I will describe to you about my bedroom by my accessories, layout/space, color and furniture so here we go. Where has it gone, well if you moved any of the clothes you'd see it because most of the time my humongous pile of absolute junk makes the floor camouflage like it's ready to go out hunting.The mess,I swear it's never ending. A metaphor is a literary device in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action in a way that is not possible in a literal sense. A metaphor is a figure of speech that describes an object or action in a way that "one of them is a full size katana", Great story, the vocabulary was good and very descriptive. Cleanliness is key for a happy mum. MY BEDROOM Like I mentioned before, my windows take up quite a lot of space, meaning that I don't have very much room for any other decorations. You described thing very well. My accessories are very colourful, my pens and pencils are all kinds of colours. Two beds tucked in opposite corners, each with bedside tables and desks nearby for ease of use. I like how I am able to visualize your bedroom. Another person who might call their home a prison could be someone who feels like theyre sick of being at home on vacation and wants to go back to school. Above my bed are two medium sized paintings, one of an owl and the other of a tree. Sometimes a little bit of exaggeration creates the best metaphors. Great writing. Ano ang Imahinasyong guhit na naghahati sa daigdig sa magkaibang araw? Beware of the wardrobe if you go underneath it something is bound to fall on your head or all my stuff will avalanche out. MY BEDROOM. cock is life. I love my room and everyone loves their room but me living in newly renovated garage is great but has some downsides to it. My room has lots of storage places to put clothes and stuff in and a big window to look out. You have elaborated on your ideas and have given the reader evidence why it is like that. it can be a beach theme a sky theme or whatever I can come up with. I can imagine the messiness of your room and you used good punctuation and I like the Explanations. 3, Great description Hayden, you forgot to mention the constant piles of washing in it! Your email address will not be published. In my room we have really ugly wall paper, it is green and white, but ugly green. There is a popular Australian movie called The Castle that uses this metaphor in the title. The size is a king single. I am happy that Thomas likes his room, airy and small and keeps it tidy. I think Bridget's description of her room is fairly accurate. On one side is a three section wardrobe with most of my craft supplies in it. Continue useing very good punctuation and spelling. As you walk into my room you may notice the bright colours. The layout of my room is tidy and all crammed together, but the way everything fits together just adds to the style and layout of the room. You could have added some more descriptive words in there. In my room you would hear gunshots roaring from my TV. I have all my electronics are sitting next to my bed charging like my computer and my phone and ipad . The detective listened to her tales with a wooden face. Great writing Shadyn really liked it, I still ant that ps4 of yours though! By William Wightman 8WH. I love my bedroom and I wish you guys could see it person so you can see how and why I love my bedroom. I usually put the feathered ones at the bottom and the cotton ones on the top. These windows also include a door, that leads out into one of three gardens at my house. make sure it's extra creamy!! I would give you a rubric 5. It has quite a bit of mess on top of the cabinet and next to the cabinet is white and black draws which holds my books and other things and above the drawers is a colorful kite. But when you're the oldest the youngest gets your room when you move out and it usually the best room in the house. My bedroom. Love reading your stories as always! You walk into my room and pop! SHADYNS BEDROOM Yeah I know I left it messy on monday but I promise you I cleaned it up as soon as I got home [wink wink]. metaphors to describe a bedroom the root operation that is defined as correcting a portion of I liked the way that you used the senses to give a more detailed effect about your bedroom. My room doesnt smell that good. Now to the TV, it's too big! My favorite things in my room are the pink wallpaper, the cool view outside my window because there are lots of cool trees and my bed's really comfortable because it has a soft mattress, there is also a cool windowsill that you can sit on and look at those beautiful trees. You have some good simple vocabulary. R4. My tv is sitting in the corner of the room but is easy to see because of the size, it is 39 inches and cool looking. The view in spring is amazing as all of the plants have flowered and the perfume of these flowers is often in my room. 4. The style of your room to me is a dark and bright theme with all the colours and design. My double bed stands out and my desk makes some things easier to do. I am happy that I have a couch in my room it helps my back I dont know how but it does, sometimes it's easy to fall asleep on it after a long day of work. My favourite rooms is my bedroom. It gives a very accurate picture of Sophie's room. I didn't find any "I's" that were not capitals. She was fairly certain that life was a fashion show. Behind the white table theres a cupboard that I dont use instead I put my clothes in drawers in front of my bed. There is the skull of the first Tahr I have shot which gives you a clear indication that I like hunting. I would like to get a bit of colour into my room because at the moment it is pretty plain. Two clocks that are big and annoying, a computer that is big and fun and lamp that is bright, speakers that are loud and white curtains white and a mirror that is big. The theme of my bedroom is simply my favourite things. There are multi-coloured paper butterflies scattered all over the pale purple walls, swarming in corners and perching on the edges of family photographs. In my wardrobe I have shelves for my books and drawers for all my clothes. And my tall and thin window opposite the door as you come in which is my main source of light in the day. The pots I put my plants in are made out of clay and my photo frames are made out of glass. However some of your paragraphs didn't make any sense. I have a white bedside table with an alarm clock, a rose red touch lamp, and a blue bluetooth speaker. Awesome description of your room Alex. Spot on Dylan, explained your bedroom very well. We have a old square tv holder thingy that I used to swing on until I put a hole in the wall, its still there. I like the layout, colors, furniture and the style it has a red feature wall (my favorite color). On my far side wall I have a bright red clipboard with flowers on it, on the clipboard I have many pictures of my family, friends and me. These are 5 words you would use to describe my bedroom. So my bedroom might be small, but for now its just way I want it. Feel my carpet is soft and my walls feel kinda nice. R5, It is a brilliant essay. But there are some things that I would really like to change like my bed would be better if it was double size and maybe a little bit of colour on my walls would make it much better. Overall I give you a 4. All of this talking about my room reminded me of something, I need to clean it or Ill get banned from the Xbox. (Her eyes were beautiful.) I'm jealous of your room too!! My light shade is a bright red with white flowers scattered over it. The colours in my room are all colours I love and are comfortable in and around. My bed it doesn't get made and the sheet is on the floor. Use adjectives. I think that you could work on adding a few more descriptive words. Be good to keep the clothes off the floor! How my bedroom looks? I noticed that most of your words you could spell right. Lots of descriptive words and nouns and adjectives make for interesting writing and make it really easy to read. 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